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Chapter 2 · The Present

The Account

2 of 11 3 min read Ankit Choudhury

To share without consent is not generosity. It is the first theft.
— from the Council of Eden, recovered transcript

The wheel had stopped screaming about an age ago and Oris still had not gone to look at it.

He sat instead at the low table he had made for himself in a place that did not have a name yet, and he wrote. Not on the slab. On the ordinary surfaces a maker keeps for working — the ones you can correct.

He had never written anything down in his existence, and had said so, often, and had meant it as a principle rather than a habit: what is true goes on being true without assistance, and a record is the thing you start keeping on the day you stop believing that. He did not connect the two facts. He had spent the previous age proving, with his own hands, on the largest object there is, that a thing which is true can be made to stop being true if you push it hard enough — and then he had come here and sat down and reached for something to write on, and did not once ask himself why.

The cycle endures, regardless of our losses.

He read it back. It was true. Every word of it was true, which was the property he needed, and it was also the first sentence he had ever written whose truth was doing a job that its meaning was not. He set it aside without deciding anything about it and started again.

We saw our error. When we saw it, it was too late.

Better. We was doing a great deal of work in that one, and it was work he could stand behind: there had been three of them, the error had been theirs, and by the time it was legible the wheel had already been given its shove. All true. He read it twice more for the pleasure of how little of it could be disputed.

Then he wrote the third sentence, and stopped, because the third sentence was where the account either held or came apart, and he already knew which word it wanted.

Outside, behind him, some distance below the level at which he was working, a great deal of history he had not written was arranging itself into place. He could feel it the way you feel a room being tidied by someone else. He did not turn round.

The difficulty was not that anyone would accuse him. There was nobody to accuse him. His sister administered endings and had no jurisdiction over statements; his brother administered judgment and had just spent everything he had proving he could not administer it on Oris.

The difficulty was that a record which nobody could check was worthless, and a record which somebody could check would be checked.

So it would have to be a record that invited checking and survived it. Every verifiable part verifiable. Every unverifiable part small, and dull, and placed where a reader’s attention would already be moving past it. He understood this the way he understood everything he had ever built: completely, immediately, and without any sense that understanding it was unusual.

He wrote: Voris rebelled.

He looked at it for a long time.

It was true, and it was true in the narrowest possible way, which he knew and which was the point. Voris had rebelled against him. Not against the design, not against what was supposed to happen — nobody in existence knew what was supposed to happen, Oris least of all, and that was the fact the sentence was built to walk the reader past. His brother had gone somewhere he could not follow and could not name, and had done it in the course of trying to stop something. Every word of the sentence was accurate. It contained no falsehood whatsoever.

It simply began at the wrong moment. That was all. It began after.

He said the next word out loud, once, to hear what it did to the air.

“Heretic.”

It was a good word. It was a very good word.

It answered a question by making the question sound badly asked, which is the most a word can be expected to do, and it would still be doing it long after everyone who had been present had stopped being anyone at all.

He wrote it down. Then he went to see what the wheel had made of him

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